Hi Jayden, I like the way you have taken a photo of yourself with your little garden plant and written a clear introduction. To be BTB please try to use specific verbs (doing words) and nouns (naming words) to help explain your ideas.
HI Jayden I like the way you told us how to make a rocket.Next step could you change another colour of your writing because it is a bit hard to see.
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Hi Jayden, I like the way you have taken a photo of yourself with your little garden plant and written a clear introduction. To be BTB please try to use specific verbs (doing words) and nouns (naming words) to help explain your ideas.
ReplyDeleteHI Jayden I like the way you told us how to make a rocket.
ReplyDeleteNext step could you change another colour of your writing because it is a bit hard to see.
HI Jayden I like the way you told us how to make a rocket.
ReplyDeleteNext step could you change another colour of your writing because it is a bit hard to see.