Friday 23 September 2016

glacier camp,

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3 comments:

  1. Jacob23 September 2016 at 10:01

    Hi Jayden,
    I like the way you told what you did. Next step if you Chang the color you can't read it.

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  2. Reid23 September 2016 at 10:16

    Hi Jayden I like the way you used full stops and capital letters. next step some more writing about the adventure you had in Fox Glacier.

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  3. Qaiden12 October 2016 at 10:42

    Hi Jayden,
    Im Jahrome and Qaiden from kawakawa I like the way I like how you put information in the slide. you should spread the information to different slide.

    From Qaiden and Jahrome...

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