Hi Jayden,Nice work at putting your ideas in order.Next Time mayby slow down the turning. :) :) :)
Hi Jayden I like your work, you have done a good job of telling us the the main ideas of the story next time you could do a bit more words for each idea.
Hi Jayden I like the way you told me about the story you read next time can you put some more word for more be-tall .:)
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Hi Jayden,
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Next Time mayby slow down the turning. :) :) :)
Hi Jayden I like your work, you have done a good job of telling us the the main ideas of the story next time you could do a bit more words for each idea.
ReplyDeleteHi Jayden I like the way you told me about the story you read next time can you put some more word for more be-tall .:)
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